improvements

just redrew an old picture I had up on DA in like late 2010

i've been feeling like I haven't been getting anywhere in art lately... but I got some practice in today with face coloring : P. Tried using more mixes of colors... reds greens yellows etc.

ALSO IM PRETTY MUCH DEAD ON DA YAY

these were both like 2 hour speedypaints

any critiques on the right picture would be greatly appreciated. The only thing I can point out myself is that the shine on the nose is too bright+ desaturated or something like that